All - Fourth Rough Cut Feedback

• Second ident – audio and image need to fade out,
• First shot turn down audio,
• Re-record sound/re-shoot in places where there is added noise,
• Trim shots that repeat,
• Need to include high angled, Dutch angled, close up and medium close up shots,
• Needs a transition when Lucy wakes up and finds Jason has gone,
• Fade in when cast members are entering the house,
• Cut to entering of the house after a close-up of someone turning the handle,
• Prevent shots that include scenery or houses in the background,
• Include close-ups of light switches being turned on,
• Low angles so person blocks out what is behind,
• See feet walking along instead of people,
• Add a shot of someone closing the door (entrance to the house)
• At start try not to show people,
• Over the shoulder of Liam or point of view from Liam whilst entering the living room,
• Small cut when Lucy closes the door,
• Play around with colourings,
• Scraping or shadow by the window,
• Can’t go from false scare to people asleep – needs a transition,
• Add point of view shots from Peter whilst entering the house and rooms whilst being scared,
• Low angle of Patrick walking – needs big boots on not socks,
• When reaching down towards Liam have a shot of hands reaching for the camera,
• More of a struggle between Liam and Patrick, before being dragged off. Continued whilst being dragged away. As well as a shot of the sleeping bag being kicked around etc,
• Decrease volume at appropriate stages of the film,
• Cut between Lucy sleeping and Liam being dragged off,
• Pete needs to leave a bedroom door open,
• Shoot the scene where Lucy and Pete find the body outside – will be able to use fake blood.